re-edit

i was not happy with my first edits for this shoot so i started over and took a better look at the images that i had and edited totally different. i cropped and twisted the image desaturated the whole image. darkened the eyes and hair and burned the lips just a little. in light room i used the brush tool to soften the skin. i am now much happier with this edit and the image is much better than my first attempt wich would of really stood out in a bad way from the other images that i am submitting.